Rainbow

 

After a heavy rain, was walking alone on a dead lane towards my unknown destiny (?)

Right on the east side of the above, down to earth
Three colors, in a united bound, spread on the sky.
The magic colors touches the earth to giggle

Oh beautiful Rainbow!

You always remind me of someone
Someone, who likes to charm me as you do to sky
Who always reassure his existence and make my belief stronger
Who loves me more and more days go by

Make me filled for a while, gives his dreams in my eyes..
My hopes raise again like a first leaf from a seed..

But……………………

Me and sky both know the truth, you are just a beautiful illusion
you will be gone again soon, to raise the dreams of another sky!!!!

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This poem is dedicated to Bobby Burcham, who always encourage me to listen to my heart and touch the sky with my wings of imagination.. Thank you.

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10 thoughts on “Rainbow

  1. Its a good attempt.
    Few Comments:
    Why Rainbow as three colors ? Is it Birth,Life and Death?

    There is a contrast in the thought. You are going for an unknown destination with a dead lane ahead and also you are welcoming the another rainbow to beautify the sky.

    Why life starts at the outset with a pessimistic view?

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  2. Hi! Deepa. As for as my concern It is really good poem and its all about Immagination of the your beauty feeling. By reading this we can get some relaxation and peace. Infact I like poems or stories like your “Missing You”

    Anyways Wish You all the Best.. And Congratulations for such great words, which have come out of your pen.

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  3. Very Nicely composed and Presented, Congrats Deepa yet again U Proved your Talent.
    But To Me Somehow this is a Poem Of sorrow, Sadness as if I could Feel the Pain, I think I Will Enjoy this Poem even More If I Read it After I Lost the Love Of My Life.
    Thank You Deepa, For This Unique Creation and Converting a Very Special State Of mind in To Words, U R Really Talented, Best Of Luck 4 your future, May U R Rainbow Last 4 ever.

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  4. amazingly beautiful.

    Make me filled for a while, gives his dreams in my eyes..
    My hopes raise again like a first leaf from a seed..

    But……………………

    Me and sky both know the truth, you are just a beautiful illusion
    you will be gone again soon, to raise the dreams of another sky!!!!
    ……..
    hv lvd thz lines a lot as i can relate to them.

    bhalo theko di
    🙂 🙂 🙂

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  5. “You always remind me of someone
    Someone, who likes to charm me as you do to sky
    Who always reassure his existence and make my belief stronger
    Who loves me more and more days go by”

    beautiful thoughts….very nicely composed….the raibow may be a beautiful illusion….but it keeps coming back….to fill our hearts with joy….don't be sad….all the best

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